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Nareto: The Scret Of Shiobi is a Fanfic by rosehokagegirlx47. It can be found here. It seems to be becoming the My Immortal of Naruto.

The story centres around Emeraldia Brightmoon who is said in a prophecy from Toad God is the only kunoch able to defet the Acutesushi. It Gets Worse from there. The plot, if there even is one, is mostly a Random Events Plot.

A dramatic reading can be found here

Compare My Immortal, Starkits Prophecy and Naruto Veangance Revelaitons.


This Fic Contains Examples Of:

 Mary Sue:"No, I did not feed your lion. Lions are not pets. They are dangerous animals, and I don't want to lose a limb because you were stupid enough to adopt one."

Emeraldia: "Jefff wood neber hert me!"

Mary Sue:"Yes, but I'm not you, am I? You could walk up to the Akatsuki leader and he would immediately start calling you his dream princess. I'm an ordinary person, and probably the only one in this town! Honestly, when I graduate from Ninja Academy I'm moving to a place where the people have sense!"

  • Original Character: Emeraldia, Jeff, R Teach, Y Teach, J Teach, X Teach, Butter Kid, Brown Boris, Ted, Dye, Osher Bosher, Luna, Fire Dad, Silvette, Darkeye, etc.
  • Parody Sue: Emeraldia, certainly.
  • Product Placement: Apollo Justice's hideout is at Burger King.
  • Rapunzel Hair: Emeraldia's "wast" length hair.
  • Redundancy Department of Redundancy: "loudly yelled loudly", among others.
  • Rouge Angles of Satin
  • So Beautiful It's a Curse: Averted, which is odd considering the nature of the main character and the story.
  • Spell My Name with an "S": Gaara is almost never spelled correctly. The worst offender is probably in Chapter Fib when it's spelled as Mario.
    • It gets pretty bad with Kankuro, too, to the point where it's sometimes almost impossible to tell whether the story is talking about him at all. "Klank" is actually one of the better attempts. And it doesn't help that the apparent Original Character "Brown Boris" seems essentially interchangeable with Kankuro, given how he's listed alongside Temari and later succeeds Gaara as Kazekage.
    • Sakura is another frequent example in how many ways it's spelled, how often it changes, and how different the spellings are from each other and the actual name.
  • The Phonics
  • Trailers Always Lie: The summary mentions a Love Triangle between Emeraldia, Sasuke and Naruto, but Sasuke doesn't appear until the end of Chatter Fib.
  • Troll Fic: Almost certainly. The character of Mary Sue speaking in perfect English and not being a Mary Sue despite being called Mary Sue indicates that the author knows what a Mary Sue is, therefore is almost definitely a troll.
    • And some of the spelling mistakes are just too perfect to be accidental. "Loin" instead of "lion" is almost acceptable, but "Acutesushi"? That could've been the Cupertino Effect if not for the fact that it's Acutesushi and not Acute Sushi. And the addition of completely random characters from other fandoms and a few real life people in the most recent chapters(Twilight Sparkle, Xemnas, Ichigo Kurosaki, the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, Adolf Hitler, Iron Man, Tom Hanks...)
  • Villains Out Shopping: Danzo and Darkeye go to a movie together. However, the movie is called "How to Take Over the World".
  • Weaksauce Weakness: Gaara gets washed away by water.
  • Worf Had the Flu: Emeraldia only falls into the hole Sakura creates because she had to fight "six hundread seventy ate joenine on her weigh to shool".
  • You Killed My Brother: Kankuro to Emeraldia.
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