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* [[Fetish Retardant]]: Crossdressing kink, teacher/student, and age difference are perfectly serviceable fetishes. This story manages to make all three disgusting via purple prose and romanticized child grooming.
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* [[Fetish Retardant]]: Cross-dressing, teacher/student, and age difference are perfectly serviceable fetishes. This story manages to make all three disgusting via purple prose and romanticized child grooming.
 
* [[Ron the Death Eater]]: While the Dursleys were ''not'' good people and treated Harry like shit in the canon, chapter one suggests very strongly that Dudley and Vernon would have sexually abused him had they lived longer.
  
* [[Ron the Death Eater]]: While the Dursleys were ''not'' good people and treated Harry like shit in the canon, chapter one suggests very strongly that Dudley and Vernon would have sexually abused him had they lived longer.
 
* [[Squick]]: Oh, where to begin...
  
* [[Squick]]: Oh, where to begin...
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** Harry's obsession with carrying Snape's babies.
  
** Harry's obsession with carrying Snape's babies.
 
** Anytime Snape and Harry keep up the sexy talk while in their John and Mary guises.
  
** Anytime Snape and Harry keep up the sexy talk while in their John and Mary guises.
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** Harry's [[Virginity Makes You Stupid|utter naivete]] when it comes to sex being played up as cute and desireable.
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** Harry's [[Virginity Makes You Stupid|utter naivete]] when it comes to sex being played up as cute and appealing. Especially when Snape takes on a gentle fatherly role in explaining to him the birds and the bees.
 
* [[They Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot]]: Ron and Draco. The way they end up together is actually somewhat interesting; Draco is disowned by his father and Narcissa disappears, causing Draco to stay with the Weasleys and a change in their relationship. But it's mostly told through secondhand exposition, and the reader gets only one scene of them together in the final part.
  
* [[They Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot]]: Ron and Draco. The way they end up together is actually somewhat interesting; Draco is disowned by his father and Narcissa disappears, causing Draco to stay with the Weasleys and a change in their relationship. But it's mostly told through secondhand exposition, and the reader gets only one scene of them together in the final part.
 
** Really, the idea of Snape saving Harry from certain death and the two being forced to live together for safety ''could'' be an interesting AU plot. But it's just a flimsy setup to put Harry in frilly dresses and make him Snape's sex doll.
  
** Really, the idea of Snape saving Harry from certain death and the two being forced to live together for safety ''could'' be an interesting AU plot. But it's just a flimsy setup to put Harry in frilly dresses and make him Snape's sex doll.

Revision as of 16:17, 13 August 2020

  • Fetish Retardant: Cross-dressing, teacher/student, and age difference are perfectly serviceable fetishes. This story manages to make all three disgusting via purple prose and romanticized child grooming.
  • Ron the Death Eater: While the Dursleys were not good people and treated Harry like shit in the canon, chapter one suggests very strongly that Dudley and Vernon would have sexually abused him had they lived longer.
  • Squick: Oh, where to begin...
    • The enema scenes, particularly how Snape and Harry make out while the latter empties himself.
    • The scene where Snape drizzles Harry's ass with chocolate sauce and licks it off him.
    • Harry's obsession with carrying Snape's babies.
    • Anytime Snape and Harry keep up the sexy talk while in their John and Mary guises.
    • Harry's utter naivete when it comes to sex being played up as cute and appealing. Especially when Snape takes on a gentle fatherly role in explaining to him the birds and the bees.
  • They Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot: Ron and Draco. The way they end up together is actually somewhat interesting; Draco is disowned by his father and Narcissa disappears, causing Draco to stay with the Weasleys and a change in their relationship. But it's mostly told through secondhand exposition, and the reader gets only one scene of them together in the final part.
    • Really, the idea of Snape saving Harry from certain death and the two being forced to live together for safety could be an interesting AU plot. But it's just a flimsy setup to put Harry in frilly dresses and make him Snape's sex doll.
  • Wimpification: Harry begins the fic cowering and whimpering as the Death Eaters kill his foster family, is swept away to safety by big strong Snape, and it gets worse from there.
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